Commission- SketchxLuna

YAY!! My first ever critique! <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/l/l…" width="19" height="19" alt="" title="La la la la"/> I'm kinda nervous at this. ._. Oh well~ I must say this is awesome!!! <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/l/l…" width="19" height="19" alt="" title="La la la la"/>

It is Cute/Lovely/Wonderful/beautiful/epic and etc!! Your so talented fire~ <img class="avatar" src="a.deviantart.net/avatars/h/a/h…" alt="" title="Happyhappyplz"/>

The boy looks so handsome while the girl looks so cute~ <img class="avatar" src="a.deviantart.net/avatars/l/o/l…" alt="" title="loveloveplz"/>

However...(wait, don't leave yet D: ), the boy kinda reminds me of Red from Pokemon Red(game) XDD //slapped//

sorry, I know this critique is stupid but Idk what to say it is too awesome too express in words!! D: plus the minumum is 100 words.. e.e" //slapped//

oh well, I'll say it again, this is awesome/wonderful/epic/beautiful/cute/lovely and other good stuff!! <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/l/l…" width="19" height="19" alt="" title="La la la la"/> <img class="avatar" src="a.deviantart.net/avatars/g/o/g…" alt="" title="goodjobplz"/> keep up the good work, fire!! >w<